Tuesday 6 April 2010

Progression To Final Product






First Draft:


We posted the video halfway through working on it on YouTube so that we could get some feedback on out filming techniques before we went on to add music, the monologue, etc.

Click HERE to see on YouTube

The majority of the feedback we got was very positive and some gave us good ideas on how to improve it


We also asked our audience to answer 3 questions:

1) Comment on quality of editing and filming?

2) The aim is to introduce the main character fully, how well do you feel that this aim has been achieved? What is your understanding of the character and his lifestyle?

3) Based on the footage you've seen how successfully does the clip portray a British film as opposed to an American film?

Here is some of the feedback we got:







Penultimate Draft:


Click HERE to see the video on YouTube

After a few changes here and there and adding the music, we uploaded the video onto YouTube again to get some more feedback from our target audience.
Here is just some of the feedback we got:

From the audience feedback we can gather that have a done good job so far but still need to improve on some aspects such as lengthening shots, etc.







Final Draft:


Click HERE to see the video in YouTube

From all the feedback we got, we came up with this final version. The vast majority of the feedback has been positive and the audience has noticed our changes that they suggested.
Here is some of the feedback we got:




Actors

Actors:



Dan- Yasir Saleem

This actor was chosen for the specific role of Dan as we had wanted to challenge the traditional conventions of the stereo typical, white British 'thugs' seen in other Brit Grit films, while keeping to other conventions so as not to completely stray from the genre. Another important specification for the character of Dan , that this actor met, was that he must be aged 18+ in order for us to show him on screen with cigarettes and alcohol.






Hoodie 1- Luke Howarth


We used this actor as he was similar to Robbie Nichol (see Below) in that we had short hair, looking thuggish and wore a hoody with a chain, following many conventions.







Young Mum- Hannah Lenane

We chose for the character of the teenage mum to be played by Hannah Lenane as she met the stereo typical ideas that our audience will have of a young mum living on an estate (white, between the age of 16-17).







Hoodie 2/ Dan Friend 2- Robbie Nichol



This actor was ideal to play both the character of a hooded youth as well as an older thug friend of Dan's as we felt that his appearance is simplistic, making it easy for his look to be manipulated via costume to become different characters successfully. For example his shaved head can be associated with both an older man as well as a youth. Similarly to the specifications of the actor to play Dan, it was important that the actor playing the role of Dan's friends in the pub was 18+, once again this actor met this specification.




Dan Friend 1 - Jack Reynolds

We chose this actor because he fit the most important standards we needed - young and white. Also, we were aware that he was a good actor and could easily play any role that we gave him.



Props and Costumes

Props:




Dog on leash





Pram





Cigarettes





Lighter



Costumes:

Hooded Youths:

We have chosen to dress our two "Hoodie" characters in a style stereotypically associated with young working-class males - hoodies. They were given tracksuit bottoms, baggy jeans, trainers, and hooded tops. When on camera, they are shown with their hoods up, slightly concealing their faces in an attempt to make themselves seem more mysterious and intimidating.





Dan:

Dan is shown wearing a hooded leather jacket, and a checkered shirt. Whilst able to maintain an urban style typical of Londoners, he is also, by wearing a shirt, showing that he is more intelligent and thus suggesting he is of a higher 'rank' in the firm than the two friends in the pub





Pub Friends:
Both wear dark clothing to suggest a dark lifestyle and jackets with hoods to portray them as thugs but older than the typical hooded youth

Thursday 18 March 2010

Storyboard



Click HERE to see the storyboard on YouTube

This is our Storyboard, we posted this on YouTube.com
so that people can rate and comment on our storyboard
and use the feedback to make our film better.

Thursday 4 March 2010

Email To Confirm Use Of Song


This is the email I sent to Columbia Records to ask permission to use the song Fast Fuse - Kasabian:





It reads:

Dear Sir or Madam

My name is Robbie Nichol
I am currently working on my Media Studies project in school and i was wondering if you could give me permission to use the song Fast Fuse by the band Kasabian in my film.
Thank you in advance for your time

Robbie

We are still waiting for a reply to the email



Filming Locations

Council Estate Scene
Lambeth, Greater London SW12 0, UK
(near Balham)

Satellite View

















Map View
















Surrounding Area

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Pub:

- The Five Bells: 68 - 70 Streatham High Road, London, SW16 1DA,Tel: 08721 077 077
- Duke of Cambridge: 7 Holmesdale Road, Croydon, CR0 2LR, United Kingdom‎ - 020 8665 6440















We have chosen to film the exterior of this pub in order to establish further information about the character and setting of the story as the surrounding area is very run-down, urban and working class -estates and council housing can be seen in the background. Also, on the front of the pub we can see an English flag, further establishing the location as well as informing audiences of the characters lifestyle as we can see the slogan 'Palace and Proud' on the front of the pub.





















Organisation

Filming On Location:

Football Match Dates

- Sunday 14th February 2010


Crystal Palace v Aston Villa. Kick-Off - 3.45pm

- Wednesday 17th February 2010


Crystal Palace v Reading. Kick-Off - 8.00pm

- Saturday 20th February 2010


Crystal Palace v Coventry City. Kick-Off 3.00pm


Council Estates:

- Crystal Palace

- Selhurst

- Thornton Heath

- Balham


Pub:

- The Five Bells: 68 - 70 Streatham High Road, London, SW16 1DA


Tel: 08721 077 077



Free Periods


Monday:

Yasir: Period 4, Hannah: Period 4, Robbie: Period 4 and 6, Luke: 3 and 6

Tuesday:

Yasir: Period 5, Hannah: Period 5, Robbie: Period 1, 2 and 5, Luke: Period 3

Wednesday:

Yasir: Period 5, Hannah: Period 5, Robbie: Period 3, Luke: Period 5

Thursday:

Yasir: Period 1 and 2, Hannah: Period 1 and 2, Robbie: Period 1, 2 and 4, Luke: None

Friday

Yasir: Period 3, Hannah: Period 3, Robbie: Period 3 and 5, Luke: Period 1 and 2



Equipment:

- Tripod and Camera

Monday 22 February 2010

Script

Dan: How do you get your kicks? Some will choose the easy way out from the shitty existence we’ve imposed upon ourselves. Waking up everyday at 6.30 to get the tube with a load of cognoscenti bastards, and accept their place in the nostalgia of office life, take their orders from some big shot fucking cunt in a shirt and tie, make the instant coffee and fill their place in the endless line of scum, working for minimum wage –that they’ll only spunk away anyway on kebabs, booze and a 10 pack of Mayfair as they try to accept the lives they lead. After that go back to the 2 bedroom, 1 bathroom, semi-detached shit hole in no-wheres-ville, complete with a loveless marriage that’s descending into a sexless, joyless routine of Iceland ready made microwavable dinners and Saturday night TV. All of which was settled for just so you don’t die alone. Fuck that for a laugh. I choose life. I choose football. In fact you can forget the fucking football, I choose the carnage that comes with it. Football doesn’t stem from violence, but the violence stems from football. The broken knuckles, chipped teeth, covered in claret –it comes from within. You either have it, or you fuck off.

Friday 12 February 2010

Film Treatment

Film Treatment
Robbie, Yasir, Hannah, Luke


The year is 1995, London, and we see a working class estate, where old worn-down electrical appliances found on the street and blood stained walls is a norm. Two best friends (aged 10), who have grown up together, are running away from an old man with broom shouting at them. The smaller, more ‘nerdier’ looking boy, TOMMY, falls over and the bigger more older-looking boy, DAN, helps him up and leads him to a back alley where they are safe from the old man. As they both catch their breath, they smile at one another and laugh about how he will get them one day and how Dan will always have Tommy’s back.

The year is now 2010, and we can see a man running through an alley, looking very scared and worried, sounds of fighting are heard in the background. Another man jumps out in front of him and criticises how Millwall fans are cowards. The nervous man then begins to verbally abuse the other man before the man tries to hit him. Before he lands his punch, a bigger man jumps out and knocks him out. The bigger then laughs before winking at him. We now find out that the bigger man is DAN. Tommy then laughs and asks why he is here because Crystal Palace aren’t even playing today. Dan then tells him once again that he will always have his back. This is when we find out that the two friends support opposing teams.

When they are walking down the street, Tommy invites Dan to the pub for a drink but Dan informs him that all the Palace fans are there at the moment and how badly they would react if they saw a Millwall fan with a Palace fan. This is when we find out that they are part of Firms and they both know about it.

A few days later, we now see Dan walking into the pub to see a group of males singing songs about how Palace is the greatest team in the world; this establishes that these people are the Palace firm. They all greet Dan very fondly, which shows us that he is of a high rank in this particular firm.

As we find out more about the characters and their friends, family and personalities, we then see Dan being informed by one of the members of the Palace firm that Crystal Palace will be playing Millwall next Week and he has to be there to lead them.

Dan then meets up with Tommy in his flat and informs him of this and that there is no way of getting out of it. They are both upset by this and feel as if it’s the end of their friends because they know they will have to fight one another. The moment is very sad and the characters are almost brought to tears. Tommy lets Dan know that both of them always knew that this day would come and they couldn’t be friends forever. Dan disagrees strongly and tells him that they will be friends till the end.

Once the match fight time arrives, both teams’ members are all fired up and ready to fight whilst Dan and Tommy are looking very serious and slightly nervous with little movement. The fight begins and we see both Dan and Tommy beating up others people but deliberately staying away from each other to avoid fighting one another, every so often, they will glance at each other. After a while, Tommy gets seriously injured with by someone wielding a knife and Dan runs straight over and carries him away, others members are shouting at him, asking what he is doing but he keeps running with Tommy in his arms.

Now both are in an alley way, Tommy is on the floor bleeding to death whilst Dan is kneeling next to him with a tear in his eye. Tommy then musters up a laugh and reminds Dan that they couldn’t be friends forever, they both laugh and Dan asks what he does now because he can’t go back or they will kill him. Tommy says that they both knew that this was a bad idea to begin with and then he bids Dan farewell as he dies. Dan begins to cry, gets up slowly and starts to walk away.